Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases the crime and violence in the society. TO what extent do you agree or disagree,give your own opinion?
Reducing crimes has been one of the government agenda over the years. Carrying fire arms by individual may he seen as a solution however, I strongly believe this would lead to further breakdown of law and order in the society.
People having gun in their possession are able to protect themselves from harm. There will be reduction in crime rates because offenders would be scared of been shot. Also, guns could be used as self defends mechanisms when attacked by robbers in their home, offices or at gun points on the road.
On the flip side, posessing gun would lead to more crimes because misunderstanding may go out of hands and shutting ensues. Furthermore, using a gun requires training and practice.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 11
- You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letterSay where / when you went on holidayExplain why you are not satisfied with your holidayTell them what you would like them to do 73
- You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems Write a letter to the manager of the language school Sally Flannigan In your letter explain your situation describe your problems tell him 84
- You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss.In your letter• Describe the job you are applying for• Say what you want to be included in the reference letter• Request that your former boss se 56
- In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'saw'?
Suggestion: saw
...Carrying fire arms by individual may he seen as a solution however, I strongly belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 592.0 1615.20841683 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 121.0 315.596192385 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89256198347 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67117359279 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.743801652893 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 178.2 506.74238477 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8893758561 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164117183479 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067196872608 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236776443054 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100657856017 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203422010206 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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