Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
An extinction of species on earth and the loss of biodiversity is the main cause by the existence of humans.
the loss of various cyles of living things is necessarily happened because of human exploitation to the nature. For example, the extinction of lion species or certain other animals due to illegal hunting and making them an economic resource or pet collection regardless of the population in the forest, this has a negative impact on the life cycle or life chain in the environment. In addition, the extinction of biodiversity is a major part of the destruction of the environment. Dense forests are the main source of the human economy by diverting functions as plantations, mining and illegal logging without paying attention to the impact on creatures that live in nature so that the environment is not controlled, animals become difficult to live and oxygen decreases.
Thus, there must be a regulation that regulates the sustainability of nature from various attacks or irresponsible human hands, including the government in certain areas with indigenous peoples or community groups around the environment or an area agreeing on a regulation and imposing sanctions on perpetrators who illegal hunting, illegal logging and diversion of forest functions as an economic source. In addition, for those who have done it, provide an education on environmental damage and provide soft skills in economic empowerment in other fields
In conclusion, whether regulation is a bad impact on the environment, it requires cooperation to make joint policies.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, even so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27240143369 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06221171401 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523297491039 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.8781517267 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.444444444 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103326122796 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493408647192 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501955497966 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861451531709 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524044631462 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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