Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
In the last decade it is observed that certain human activities have influenced the globe's ecosystem which is why some flora and fauna have been extincted. in my discourse ahead, this essay will outline valid reasons of this phenomenon and also proposed plausible solutions to tackle it.
To begin with, change of habitat is the first and foremost cause of loss of bio-diversity. This means to say that owing to urbanization when humans artificially transform environment, vegetation and natural habitats of animals are destroyed. This leads to extinction of some flora and fauna. Another noteworthy reason is overexploitation of resources. Some human activities such as harvesting and capturing of natural resources exhausts them For an instance, frequent fishing does not leave enough time for reproduction which leads to extinction of certain species of fishes.
However, despite the aforementioned causes, by taking certain stringent measures this issue can be tackled. Firstly, enforcement of stern rules and strict legislation would certainly control activities which deteriorate environment. In other words, law and orders restrict human activities in untouched habitat which allow plants and animals of that area to freely grow. Secondly, certain initiatives can aware people about detrimental impacts of their activities on ecosystem. Thus, people become more aware about their role and responsibility to protect environment.
In conclusion, although activities of human have affected environment which has negatively affected world's ecosystem, aforementioned corrective actions by government and public can improve
situation in the coming future.
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...ons by government and public can improve situation in the coming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87242798354 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08181274819 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1115498938 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153461542432 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505664912265 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459443534511 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700052009727 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485013128895 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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