The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
The advancements in the information technology sector not only enhanced the way of message being exchanged but also brought many issues that are new to humankind. Various problems such as unemployment and personal information theft could result from this situation, certain measures could be taken to tackle this situation.
The transformation of the internet has created two major problems. One of the main issues is that unemployment due to automation at the workplace. Nowadays may organizations automate their mundane workflow with the help of the internet to reduce manpower usage and improve the profit margin. This development results in job cuts and downsizing in those companies. For example, in Singapore, hypermarkets are equipped with automatic checkout machines which eliminate the need for cashiers at the counters. Another problem is identity theft by cybercriminals. Majority of individuals using their computer without proper computer knowledge. This development leads hackers to infiltrate and invades the victim's personal computer through a simple malware attack. Once a hacker gains access to the unprotected computer network it would not be a tough job for him or her to steal sensitive data from that computer system.
However, various possible courses of action could be taken to alleviate this situation. The primary solution would be empowering the unskilled labor workforce with the new skills which have high demand in the job market. When unskilled workers are equipped with appropriate skills they could land in a new job using their competencies. Another solution to solve data theft is to have necessary preventive measures in place. For example, installing an appropriate antivirus software could avoid any kind of malware attack from cybercriminals. Such preventive care not only safeguards personal computers but also avoids the risk of revealing sensitive personal information to hackers.
In conclusion, the improvements in technology brought several new problems such as job redundancies and risk of privacy but this could be addressed by teaching new skills to the unskilled workforce and implementing preventive measures to protect sensitive information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ich have high demand in the job market. When unskilled workers are equipped with app...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67371601208 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04152343654 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2169861775 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108519368559 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381809197915 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457322911866 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668111207499 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224344710225 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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