Governments prohibiting the underage children for getting full-time jobs in certain
countries. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists and researchers.
Do you agree or disagree?
In our society a highly debatable issue has been raised since long by our social thinkers, about the importance of various scholars. some are of pointing out that entertainment is more important and they should have to be more respected and praise, however some are of the view that the role of scientist and researcher could not be ignored.In this essay, I intend to elucidate the above-mentioned phenomena and partially agree with the later view.
To begin with,we live in a global world, where technology has growing leaps and bounds. The role of scientist and their contribution could play a major contributing role towards growth and not to be ignored in todays society. With the initial establishment of mankind, we are constantly moving, starting from fire to now aeroplane. For instance, computer, transportation, space, science,entertainment, internet and many other, have the hard efforts in which they spend numerous years. Although, their invention known to everybody by using in our daily lives or by gaining information, but the person behind it could not be known to everone or ignored by our society. thus, less known by the media and gaining less coverage.
The aforementioned points have its own importance on the contrary, some social scientist have raised their voice that , while materialising the impact of entertainment industry, since time immorial people use to be used in a leisure activity from the era of king to now. The significant changes we can see and gaining popularity, grab people attention and to be followed by the numerous fan. Furthermore, at international level, it presence could not be ignored, through which it gain popularity and we are know to every country. thus, the entertainement role have its more attention.
In conclusion, it can be reieterated that, it cannot be ignored that both are working towards mankind and their contribution could not be ignored, however, the growth we can see such as, special effects and camera etc. could only due to science and technology, hence it should not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63259668508 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02204234122 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.9765230137 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.933333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744346965737 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263587341168 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425864907733 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473356458325 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539373354705 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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