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<p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: "Lucida Grande", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Dear sir ,</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: "Lucida Grande", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">I am writing this letter to bring to your attention on your dogs noisepollution which disturbs our neighbours while night . Allow me to elaborate. </p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: "Lucida Grande", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">From Last month, your dog misty was barking around the night. Most of the people who work in the day shift requires plently of sleep to perform well in their job. I am aware that you are taking necessary step to control your dogs behaviour. However, the steps you took are not seen controlling the dogs performance . I think that there is a night disease or any mental stress to the dog , which you need to take care immediately .</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: "Lucida Grande", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Thus, I also infomed the neighbour regarding the dogs performance and adviced them not to feed the dog with their snacks . I hope you can emphathize the situation . So I request you to take a necessary action to reduce the issue .</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: "Lucida Grande", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Thanks </p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: "Lucida Grande", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Shabber </p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hich disturbs our neighbours while night . Allow me to elaborate. ^^
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...ary action to reduce the issue . ^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.87264150943 5.12529762239 154% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.62571215686 2.80592935109 236% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.955267184 49.4020404114 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.625 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 28.66 12.4159519038 231% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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