Is it better to shop online or in-store?

Essay topics:

Is it better to shop online or in-store?

<p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: &quot;Lucida Grande&quot;, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Dear sir ,</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: &quot;Lucida Grande&quot;, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">I am writing this letter to bring to your attention on your dogs&nbsp;noisepollution&nbsp;which disturbs our neighbours while night . Allow me to elaborate.&nbsp;</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: &quot;Lucida Grande&quot;, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">From Last month, your dog misty was barking around the night. Most of the people who work in the day shift requires&nbsp;plently&nbsp; &nbsp;of sleep to&nbsp;perform&nbsp;well in their job. I am aware that you are taking necessary step to control your dogs behaviour. However, the steps you took are&nbsp; not&nbsp; seen controlling&nbsp; the dogs performance . I think that there is a night disease or&nbsp;any mental stress to the dog , which you need to take care immediately .</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: &quot;Lucida Grande&quot;, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Thus, I also&nbsp;&nbsp;infomed&nbsp;the neighbour&nbsp;regarding&nbsp;the dogs performance and&nbsp;adviced&nbsp;them not to feed the dog with their snacks . I hope you can&nbsp;emphathize&nbsp;the situation . So I&nbsp;request&nbsp;you to take a necessary action to&nbsp;reduce&nbsp;the issue .</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: &quot;Lucida Grande&quot;, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Thanks&nbsp;</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: &quot;Lucida Grande&quot;, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Shabber&nbsp;</p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...2px; white-space: normal;'>Dear sir ,

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Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...hich disturbs our neighbours while night . Allow me to elaborate. 

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Line 1, column 968, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dogs'' or 'dog's'?
Suggestion: dogs'; dog's
...p; not  seen controlling  the dogs performance . I think that there is a n...
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...n controlling  the dogs performance . I think that there is a night disease o...
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Line 1, column 1061, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ase or any mental stress to the dog , which you need to take care immediately...
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Suggestion: .
... which you need to take care immediately .

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Line 1, column 1332, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dogs'' or 'dog's'?
Suggestion: dogs'; dog's
...p;the neighbour regarding the dogs performance and adviced them ...
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Line 1, column 1413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...em not to feed the dog with their snacks . I hope you can emphathize the...
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...u can emphathize the situation . So I request you to take a ne...
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...ary action to reduce the issue .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.87264150943 5.12529762239 154% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.62571215686 2.80592935109 236% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.955267184 49.4020404114 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.625 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 28.66 12.4159519038 231% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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