It is better for young people to get the advises from old people than young ones. Do you agree or disagree?
It is an old saying that individuals who follow the path of experienced aged people are able to perform better in many fields and opinion of elderly people plays a vital role, where as suggestion of their peer group is not that effective. I completely agree with notion that old people can guide the youngsters and can light their path in much better way.
To begin with, elderly people have the practical experience of the life. They have gone through different phases of life and have faced both failure and success. So it is irrefutable that they can advice the best possible solution to any problem and can guide in much better way. Many old people also act as role models for the juveniles like the hard worker and dedicated of senior player motivate the youth and by taking their expert advise they are able to give the outstanding performance and elevate in the game. Apart from this many students also take the suggestion of their parents while opting field of study in higher education. For example, doctors usually guide their children how they can have successful career in medical field.
Moving further, people of same age group usually have the feeling of competition and they try to win the race by performing better than their colleagues. Ultimately they lack to provide the best possible advice to their friend because of the fear of lacking behind. Moreover, many youth get distracted by following the path of their friends and fail to succeed in life. For instance, if maximum students in class are choosing mathematics as addition subject some are forced to opt that because of peer suggestion and lack the maturity of determining their own skills. Therefore, advice of the young ones mostly distract the individuals from their path and bring negative repercussion in the later stage of life.
In conclusion, unequivocally it depends on the free wish of the person from whom he wants to get the guidance, that is from person of same group or from elderly person, but it can not be denied the suggestion of older people can illuminate the life in much better way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...ess. So it is irrefutable that they can advice the best possible solution to any probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83286908078 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48042279963 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520891364903 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0198946609 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226635637201 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743261201666 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561597283748 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142452108975 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315678992921 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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