It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think the disadvantages of such a development outweigh its advantages? Give your opinion.
Many inventions have been introduced to the human culture in the last decade which has reshaped the people's way of living. On top of the list of inventions are cars, televisions, and refrigerators that almost no human being dream lacks of having it while the rest of the people already owns these inventions. While this might drive our life forward with less problems and worries, it does create other types of problems that in my opinion does outweigh the advantages.
In order to give a fair comparison between the advantages and disadvantages of the modern society development, we will start the comparison with the pros of such a development. To begin with, cars for sure has taken the major part of this societal change as it has solved the transportation and travel problems and dangers that used to happen in the past. Moreover, having a car has created wider range of places to live that are not necessarily near the workplace. With this being said, refrigerators does serve to have enough amount of food stored for a longer time with a better quality that has led the vast majority of families to own at least one to keep the food in. No only that, but TV also has made news across the globe to be transferred within the minute of it happening, and also is a great entertainment device on the inside of the household.
While having explored the advantages of such great inventions, we cannot conclude this comparison without showing the hidden negativities of these inventions. As a start, having a TV, a refrigerator, and a car has increased the expenses of a family, not to mention that it has created a more lazy and dependant society. To explain, nowadays people are preferring to spend most of their time on the indoors of a household watching TV rather than having an outdoor activity. While having most of the spare time wasted watching television programs instead of having more natural physical activities, and having all we want available at any time the refrigerator has caused for an increase in chronic diseases and a reduction in books reading which led to have a less self educated majority. Having all these disadvantages explored, I would prefer living in the way people used to live before these inventions are created rather than living in this modern culture,
In conclusion, with every new invention created and mass produced to the public use, comes the duty to educate the people of these inventions and their effect on our daily life. Inventions do solve today's problems, but they do also create tomorrow's issues that should be thought ahead.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... culture, In conclusion, with every new invention created and mass produced to the public...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85746606335 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72032740681 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527149321267 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.992083873 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.357142857 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100602851241 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384212322476 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234822100877 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585779455703 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018853186821 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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