It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them to learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children.
Some people believe that it is quite essential to teach children to tell the difference between good and bad things when they are young and giving them punishments is an effective way to educate them. I totally agree with this idea because children will remember the punishment they will receive when doing a wrong action. In my opinion, taking away children’s valuable belongings will be a great punishment for parents and teachers to apply.
A punishment attached to every single bad action will give children the idea that the action they have just committed is not good. this is because children’s minds are still not developed enough to reasonably tell whether the things they want to do are right or wrong. Hence, punishments are the tools to assist them to distinguish which ones are bad. For example, school children in Ho Chi Minh City are spanked when they bully their friends in class and the majority of them now recognize that they should never become bullies.
Among a variety of punishments, separating children from one of their possessions should be the one that parents and teachers are allowed to used to educate them. For one, this type of punishment is not violent, as opposed to spanking. it is also educational because it teaches children that they will be deprived of something they love when doing wrong things. For instance, many parents in Vietnam choose to forbid their children from touching their smartphones whenever they try to go home late at night.
In conclusion, it is indeed important to use punishments to give children ideas about right and wrong and depriving them of their possessions is the sort of punishment that parents and teachers should use at home or schools to give children these ideas.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01700680272 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65587022061 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3875130059 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.916666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278634740271 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116511122252 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539230288489 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195800053648 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453427532229 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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