It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages
There has been a colossal upsurge in prodigies discussing the topic of driving us to the verge of injury. While some people contend that the risks are a good way to provide us the meaningful lessons ad reach success, others assume that not worth putting yourself in danger even at one time. I personally believe the merits we can earn from putting ourselves in jeopardy outweigh the demerits and will draw my rationale in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, it is hardly unaccepted that danger is the determining factor driving us to the achievement. We may deal with many awkward circumstances in our lives that force us to choose to stay safe or challenge ourselves. Therefore, if we don’t bold to get out of our comfort zone, we don’t truly appreciate the value of our goals. Moreover, putting ourselves in predicament can teach us to be more creative and innovative in creating solutions to mitigate the case we face to. Both professional or personal aspect, we should expose to difficulties in order to help us recognize our ability. Without involving themselves in risk, professionals rarely gain their reputation and skills in their major subjects. For instance, Ho Chi Minh is originally a peasant with a motivation to liberate the nations even if it requires him to sacrifice his life and struggle with horrendous difficulties. Thanks to his patriotism, he can find a way to emancipate the Vietnamese people from an unstable period.
On the other hand, there still exist the drawbacks surrounding this issue. To be clear, people have a tendency for concerning risks because they don’t want to deal with loss and failure. It is evident that we need so much time and effort to go way back to the beginning because of the damage from danger. Obviously, difficulties sometimes may not put a threat to ourselves but to our beloved ones. To cite an example, some people challenge themselves to start up a business without experience in managing and controlling a business. The lack of knowledge can put these people in tremendous debt which bring negative repercussions on their family asset. Obviously, some professionals challenge themselves with hazardous sports activities and cause them to die or dramatical injury. These people can be a financial burden for their families or live dependently for the rest life due to one danger. However, most difficulties aim to encourage people to escape their fear and access the hall of fame in the following days. Without risk, people lack the motivation in challenging themselves and our life may become dull which is hard for us to distinguish the capability of every individual.
In conclusion, the risk does not always play a heinous role in our daily life, and sometimes can help people ameliorate their ability to the maximum level. I wholeheartedly opine that we regardless of in job or daily life should put ourselves in predicament to spur them to the stupendous achievement and cherish the meaning of this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lessons'' or 'lesson's'?
Suggestion: lessons'; lesson's
...a good way to provide us the meaningful lessons ad reach success, others assume that no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2485.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 498.0 315.596192385 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98995983936 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91535907898 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 791.1 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4339183488 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.043478261 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.652173913 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191566700251 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533888315153 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593003350596 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112952474439 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422201324707 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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