It is often argued that the extinction of species on planet is a natural way and so people should not try to stop. I completely disagree with this, as a living being it is our priority to stop the extinction of our neighboring species.
First of all, planet earth is home to various species such including animals, birds, humans and many micro-organisms. Each species plays an important role in keeping the balance of planet. if any of these vanishes the environment will suffer and the remaining beings should suffer. each and every organism contribuits in making the environment suitable for humans to live. For example, bee's play an important role in the growth of trees which results in the growth of forests. Thus, with the trees the oxygen level rises and drops the temperate of planet. In all ways bee's are helping us but now they are disappearing from the planet.
As the climatic temperature is increasing and also the reduction in the rains makes it horrible for humans to live. If the amount of bee's have not reduced then the trees might be more and also the climate will be easy to live. So as humans to live happy we need all the species.
To sum up, all species play an important role in shaping the planet. By keeping this in mind it is our main role in protecting each and every life by this we can be protected.
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct e g Dinosaur dodos There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 56
- As we are facing many problems which affect the whole planet good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Due to transporting goods and people pollution increase Some people think that government should solve this issue when other think that this is individual responsibility
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53134516282 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9061313143 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122238775598 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450468569218 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548216181356 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869070521297 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716725859739 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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