Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert and the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Today’s people like adventure and campaign so they spend their leisure time in mountains and the famous places like Manali or deserts palace. The situations at sach places are horrible due to landscape and lack of water.there are variety of pros and cons for the tourists. I will discuss my views in the forthcoming articles.
To begin with, there are plentiful advantages for the individuals who wants to pass their free time at interesting places..firstly,due to hectic lifestyle they always stressed out so tours at the hill station makes them happy n energetic which calm their mind . Secondly, some people are likes to face critical situations so that they go to such kind of spots .
on the flip sides, there are also some demerits of such conditions like some individuals would be die due to lack of water or oxygen at sach locations because many people wants to reach at the top of the mountains so they don’t care about their self and try to complete their challenges.in this conditions sometimes they loose their control and lose themselves.for example many tourists wants to ride bicycles at mountains as they are not completely learn how to ride a cycle at hills then they not properly handle the situations and met with an accident.
all in all ,people who likes adventure they should go to this kind of places
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88105726872 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80277916052 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590308370044 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.180214573 49.4020404114 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.285714286 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10823334136 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545214606816 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281881826472 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073794535906 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199767896883 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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