Nowadays everyone just want to earn money, to fulfil their basic needs. The hike in the prices of the basic requirements results in this situation. Everyone wants a luxurious life but the price of basic requirements doesn't allow them to have such life and hence both parents start working to earn.
When both parents start working they give not even required time to their children. In early years the child is admitted to creche, after that day boarding or boarding schools, or he is alone at home after school. At night when the parents come back they saw their child sleeping, and in morning everyone is in hurry to reach office and school.
This way they didn't get time for each other, and this sows the seeds of generation gap, lies, bad habits and in some cases it also leads to depression to the child. The future of the child seems to be dark.
In some cases, it is also observed that the child gets into the bad company and start taking drugs to get rid of the depression, to hide their feelings and emotions, and with time he /she gets addicted to such things and it becomes a need, and the time when parents realise what their child is suffering from, its too late.
Sometimes the child became mature earlier than his age, and lost his childhood, because of which he cannot enjoy his life, and this results in depression.
The proper guidance, love and care in the early stages of life is required to make the child a confident and better person, but due to the busy schedule of parents they didn't give time to their children, the rest are too far.
To sum up, every parent must promise himself /herself to give enough time to their children. Money is important but not more than your children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ife but the price of basic requirements doesnt allow them to have such life and hence ...
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Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nce both parents start working to earn. When both parents start working they give no...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...reach office and school. This way they didnt get time for each other, and this sows ...
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Line 6, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ue to the busy schedule of parents they didnt give time to their children, the rest a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 309.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54045307443 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17163919636 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.931034482759 859% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.775719883 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21445117702 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760501986239 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527111220301 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966839561918 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204135126751 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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