Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples
Recently the most important trouble in the world and the nature is climate transforming. Some people believe that, stop using fossil fuel, would help to reduce climate changes. I totally agree about using natural energy instead of gas or coal. I admit this view because of three main reasons such as, the importance of environment, the irreparable effect of harmful.
Firstly, environment is one of the important issues in our lives in comparison with the industry. If the climate changes, it could be harmful for plants and animals or even human beings who lives on the earth. For example, industrial fuel caused contamination of the air; as a result, we would face the problems of global warming. Actually, environment which is one of the most significant debating issues these days is much more important than economic problems of the industries.
Secondly, some harmful effect of the industrial fuel might never become recompense. In fact, changing the climate might lead the environment to happen bunch of difficulties which are impossible to resolve, as a matter of fact changing the climate might extinct some species which can live only in a particular climate or have special habitat. That happens because of the ecosystem change. So the extinction of animals is one of the unpleasant results of changing the climate and it is impossible to have that kind of species again.
To sum up, Climate changing would be one of the considerably important subjects to discuss and there are some reasons for that such as, fossil fuel. Although some people agree to use other energy resources such as wind, there is finding economic problem for industry. I agree with changing the resources into natural resource.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239616613419 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.134185303514 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0926517571885 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479233226837 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0223642172524 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140575079872 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0287539936102 0.0403226058552 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70348619076 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0223642172524 0.0326793684256 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00319488817891 0.00163938923432 195% => OK
Determiners: 0.115015974441 0.0861772015684 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255591054313 0.021408717616 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127795527157 0.011925033212 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1720.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 316.048096192 89% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09929078014 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382978723404 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308510638298 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191489361702 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117021276596 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70348619076 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 53.1948871435 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3354053619 49.517814964 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.6510638298 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.69124875643 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216194370814 0.332605444948 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123661396054 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0647770595312 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552393194581 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140845353707 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10187111979 0.134430193775 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579844496318 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.409676877452 0.324371583561 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.081871175294 0.0638462369009 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169943974457 0.228012699653 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05349048642 0.058150111329 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.