Most of the times considerably the rising of the crimes, which is committed by teenager, are related to the violence of the media. I completely agree that the mass media focus on violent and sensational crimes. So we need to discuss the main reasons and the effect of media on increasing the juvenile adequacies then the ways to prevent and solve this unpleasant situation.
It is obvious that media have increased the crime because of two main reasons. Firstly, teenager tends to have role models. So if their favorite role model involves in gangs or was criminal, they would have been negatively influenced by the role model and consequently might commit a crime. Secondly, media is one of the most important parts of our life which we spend most of our time with. If the media's content was violence, it would affect our behavior and we would become depressed or disappointed, as a result we might encourage committing crime to make our feeling better and reduce the depression.
The solutions which have resolved the massive raise of juvenile adequacies is to enforce observation on the children and pay attention to age limitations. Children should use the media under their parent's observation and they have to be allowed to watch some kind of films for instance. Furthermore, parents should pay attention to age limitation of some kind of movies at first the children might break down but that is for their own benefits. Generally I enjoy bringing children up with full of attention and care.
In conclusion, most of the time people believe that violence in the media is an acceptable reason for rising of teenager crimes. In fact several reasons are known up to now, and media is one of the most discussable ones. We debate the effects and the ways to avoid the raise of the crimes above
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252252252252 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.156156156156 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0660660660661 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042042042042 0.0501214627716 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0540540540541 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129129129129 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.036036036036 0.0403226058552 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65098129877 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036036036036 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00600600600601 0.00163938923432 366% => OK
Determiners: 0.102102102102 0.0861772015684 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.024024024024 0.021408717616 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00900900900901 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1802.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83171521036 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31067961165 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249190938511 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177993527508 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122977346278 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65098129877 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.56093040696 93% => OK
Word variations: 53.7200010847 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8684001646 49.517814964 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.133333333 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 45.5190938511 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.65476190476 1.69124875643 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47454340337 0.332605444948 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143598977194 0.102741220458 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0822621882034 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587661255461 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158687437903 0.148594505496 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211561989866 0.134430193775 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109186071292 0.0742795772207 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347759553832 0.324371583561 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0471970860375 0.0638462369009 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351939371871 0.228012699653 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799879570653 0.058150111329 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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