Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
Recently the most important trouble in the world and the nature is climate transforming. Finish using fossil fuel in some people's opinion would help to reduce climate changes. I totally agree about using natural energy instead of gas or coal. I am agree because of three main reasons such as, the importance of environment, the Irreparable effect of harmful fuels and the running out feature of gas and coal.
Firstly, environment is one of the important issues in our lives and the climate change could be harmful for plants and animals or even human beings on the earth. For example, transforming climate to warmer type, could melt the ice of the pole and extinct the penguins. As another example, industrial fuel makes pollution and put them in the air, as a result, we face the problems of global warming. Actually, environment is much more important than economical problems of the industries.
Secondly, some harmful effect of the industrial fuel might never become recompense. In fact, by changing the climate, something happens that is too difficult or impossible to resolve that As a matter of fact changing in climate might extinct some species which can live in particular climate. So the extinction of animals is one of the unpleasant results of changing the climate and it is impossible to have that kind of species again.
Thirdly, in my point of view there is a lot of natural resource. That means fuel such as gas, coal and … would be running out and human have to find a replacement some other time in the future, so it is much more better that they pay attention to the environment and change their fuel sooner. For example some powerful governments like Americans try to find some other way to replace with common industrial fuel because of the lack of their access to them. Then it is possible to use the natural kind of energies in order to have a replacement plan for finishing the industrial fuel.
To sum up, Climate changing would be one of the considerably important subjects to discuss and there are some reasons for that such as, fossil fuel. Although some people agree to use other energy resources such as wind, there is finding economical problem for industry. I agree with changing the resources into natural resource.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...rming. Finish using fossil fuel in some peoples opinion would help to reduce climate ch...
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Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ral energy instead of gas or coal. I am agree because of three main reasons such as, ...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...environment is much more important than economical problems of the industries. Secondly...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...other time in the future, so it is much more better that they pay attention to the environm...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example', 'in fact', 'in particular', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244075829384 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.132701421801 0.155533422707 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0995260663507 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473933649289 0.0501214627716 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0331753554502 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13981042654 0.122226691241 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0284360189573 0.0403226058552 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61886859363 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331753554502 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00473933649289 0.00163938923432 289% => OK
Determiners: 0.104265402844 0.0861772015684 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189573459716 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00473933649289 0.011925033212 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2262.0 1933.35771543 117% => OK
No of words: 386.0 316.048096192 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86010362694 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341968911917 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279792746114 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165803108808 0.203846283523 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111398963731 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61886859363 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484455958549 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.8661452867 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4444444444 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5937346743 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 49.4237190558 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.93333333333 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244823273141 0.332605444948 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152142258229 0.102741220458 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0695462035503 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.570535038675 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152118955295 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107155009278 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590764891104 0.0742795772207 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437401768223 0.324371583561 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0391393339941 0.0638462369009 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181730242795 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406420336796 0.058150111329 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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