Someone, probably scientists, guess that a TV, a fridge and a car are wanted by every human. This essay will argue that advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will first demonstrate that this demands are positive and why this desire appears, followed by an analysis of efficiency factor of this items in modern life.
The main reason to want a car, a TV and a fridge is that these contrivances make our life more comfortable. That is to say that they helps us in several aspects of life. For example, cars economy our time by rapidly transport people to destination, thanks to fridges, we can increase products shelf life and we always know what is happening in the world by news from a TV. Moreover, demand creates supply. If everyone didn’t wish these items, it wouldn’t be produced. In other words science nowadays developed and keep developing. Every discovery entails other discovery, so step by step and it’s possible to make robot-surgery etc. Europe is a prime example, where unmanned vehicle isn’t rarity already.
Those opposed to this say that all this items need service: gasoline, electricity, freon. However, these is actually no evidence to support this view and benefits heavy outweigh all this expenses.
On balance, the fact that cars, fridges and TVs make our life more comfortable and easier clearly outweighs the flawed argument of their expensive service.
- The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut arts and music out of that curriculum so that children can focus on the useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree? 73
- Nowadays people show more anti-social behaviour and lack of respect to others. What are the causes? How could we improve the situation? 11
- In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules? 78
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents an 79
- It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do disadvantages of this development for society outweigh advantages? 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... by an analysis of efficiency factor of this items in modern life. The main reason ...
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Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...e comfortable. That is to say that they helps us in several aspects of life. For exam...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...dy. Those opposed to this say that all this items need service: gasoline, electrici...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11206896552 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73751353978 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659482758621 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9800409252 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191912966484 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602134145679 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558856138015 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10626560589 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605154893428 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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