Both pie charts show information about Australian household energy. The former depicts how energy is used and the latter depicts the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
We can primary underline that difference of heating between energy usage and gas emissions is around 35%. The second striking distinction is percentage of part which is called “other appliances” in both charts, it is 13%.
As for Australian household energy use chart, only 2% is used for cooling during 42% of energy is produced heating. However, those heating doesn’t include water heating, this appliance is required 30% of all energy. Other appliances takes third place by amount of energy use.
Anyway, greenhouse gas emissions has other priority: the most part is water heating and count is resemblance with previous graph, other appliances takes second place with 28%; heating and refrigeration share third places with difference in 1 percent. Cooling emits minimal amount of greenhouse gas emissions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mal amount of greenhouse gas emissions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, second, third, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52229299363 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8092854735 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1135752137 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411070090187 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161570177026 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134045730929 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257497271541 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192788119675 0.0819641961636 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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