You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the one-week walking trip that will take place in the mountains.
I am highly attracted to such activities for many reasons. Firstly, It was my childhood`s hobby to do indoor climbing games with my friends. Moreover, being in the middle of nature was always my dream. Finally, these journeys act as a perfect mood elevator and stress removal and that is why I cannot wait to participate in.
I would like to ask about the time and cost of these trips. I would appreciate it if you could send me the full schedule for the next month.
Unfortunately, I do not feel that I am physically fit for such an activity. This is because climbing requires strong muscles and I have a previous injury in my knee. Consequently, I would appreciate if your agency could provide me with a professional assistance.
I await your prompt response and thanks a lot for taking the time to consider my request.
Yours faithfully,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71764705882 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87191989363 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1092183993 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9090909091 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115909806138 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386421508028 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399255890272 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663295283309 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366790447332 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.