Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
Although, some people agree that labour-saving like dishwashers or communication tools make our life easier by reducing the stress, others think the opposite. In my opinion these new technology will help us and make our life easier.
Firstly, one of the major cause which makes us consider the work saver machines, is helping us while we are doing other duty. For example the dishwashers, simply the mother can use it until she finish the work which she ought to do like teaching her children. Furthermore it will keep the dishes away from our babies. Secondly, the electronic devices like the laptop will play a rule in arranging our stuff, such as, pictures, files, and our emails as well. Which will reduce our stress. And I agree.
On other hand, some people believed that these time saver machines will rise up our stress level. Especially if they have been taken a lot from our time and concentration. Which will affect our ability to listen and taking care of our family members. As well as if we collect all the data inside the electrical machine like computer and suddenly we lose them it will rise our tension level.
In conclusion, these devices had made for us in order to help and make our life better from its name Modern Technology. So if we learn the best ways of how we can use them probably then they will relieve our stress and will keep up our mind and our healthy in an excellent stage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finishes'.
Suggestion: finishes
... simply the mother can use it until she finish the work which she ought to do like tea...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ought to do like teaching her children. Furthermore it will keep the dishes away from our b...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ictures, files, and our emails as well. Which will reduce our stress. And I agree. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65338645418 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39551254256 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1515023367 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4285714286 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270469080958 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979659038128 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842985477923 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186423414426 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912488857404 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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