learning to play sports teaches valuable skills
Playing sport is considered as a method to work out effectively and also a way to learn valuable skill. From my point of view, i have no doubt about this statement.
To begin with, no one can deny the importance of team sport in real life. Playing sport can teach people how to work with others. For instance, among my friends, who are the member of volleyball team. Whenever our class has team-exercise, they will do it better than others. They know the way to listen and share their ideas with member, so that they will complete the assignment easily. Moreover, learning to play sport improve our strength of will due to daily traning.
There are some suggestion that people had better learn to deal with a Math exercise than play sport. It would be true. However, playing sport is a great chance to enhance our health, also to learn social skills from our opponents. From that we can broaden our knowledge not only math but also other side in the world.
To sum up, playing sport is a essential need toward each person. It's not only keep fit but also a way to communicate with people outside. Because of these reason, people should spend time to playing any kinds of sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the world. To sum up, playing sport is a essential need toward each person. ...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... world. To sum up, playing sport is a essential need toward each person. Its ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59433962264 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31555253727 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5702260396 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.9333333333 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370962423947 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117905371817 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13312993156 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220383037935 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569097761174 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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