Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that in recent years many people have been immigrating to different countries. Some individuals believe speaking their native language can cause social as well as practical problems. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.
Firstly, the most common problem faced by any individual while expressing their views in any foreign language is communication. This happens when an individual tries to express his view in a positive manner, which can be misunderstood by the foreign native in a completely different way. As a result, this will lead to a serious social issue. To cite an example, an individual from India moves to Canada will have different view on society and if he tries to impose the same in a foreign country, the natives may feel offended. However, if, the foreigner tries to understand their way of presenting facts, then this issue can be resolved.
Secondly, individuals may also face some practical issues relating to adaptation. The reason for this is due to variation in environmental changes. For instance, people moving from a hot country, like Dubai immigrate to a cold country, like Canada, where the temperature is below 0 degrees, may find it difficult to survive under those extreme conditions. If the migrating individuals learn new ways to adapt, then these issues can be ignored.
In conclusion, problems are a part of human survival, which needs to be tackled in an effective way despite the variety of issues faced. People moving abroad face many difficulties, which cannot be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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...man survival, which needs to be tackled in an effective way despite the variety of issues faced. Pe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fficulties, which cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11742424242 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87617255603 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7696007633 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179092063786 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675723100922 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694427626908 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109796984436 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100776633977 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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