In many cities young people prefer shopping as a form of leisure activity, why do you this this happens and is positive or negative development?
In recent times, culture has been shifting from need of certain things to show-off. Specially, young generation are more worried about how they look than what they are doing. Because of this trend, they tend to spend more time and money on shopping and it became their hobby.
Let us begin by looking at some of the causes of this development. Firstly, youngsters are becoming fashion freak and by looking at them, companies and designers are coming up with innovative and myriad of choices. Due to this young people spend like they are in the race of looking unique and trendy. This sometime lead to overburden on their pocket just to fill their wardrobe with variety of apparel. Another major reason is following celebrity culture. For example, once the new movie is released, sales of the dresses worn by actress increases rampantly.
Dressing up in the presentable attire based on the occasion is never been an issue but being reckless spender in my opinion is the negative development. By doing this, people are wasting their time and money both. If youth invest their time for some active leisure activity, it will help their mental and physical development. For instance, one of the recent study revealed that, the time one spend in leisure activity is directly linked to their psychological functioning.
In conclusion, current trending hobby of shopping in cities have many negative impacts. Despite of the fact that one should be dressed decently according to occasion, instead of impulsive spending on a shopping as a leisure, young people should spend on active leisure activity which can help improve their cognitive ability.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08118081181 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54235776637 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.302636666 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196557268121 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663885928721 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626542658256 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113538586144 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287180730298 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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