Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
Most people know the importance of keeping their surrounding clean and tidy. There are several benefits including health as well as effectiveness at workplace. In my view, I completely support keeping our home and offices tidy and clean.
If you go to your friend's place and see the cluttered home, what will be your reaction and feeling? Obviously, It will not be good. On the contrary, visiting tidy and clean house gives you pleasant feelings and vibes which stimulates quality thoughts. Such environment can also boost your happiness level which is better to mental health. Additionally, unorganized place can be the house of insects and other harmful bacteria which are cause to many illnesses. For example, a recent study of health and environment published reveals that cleanliness of your surroundings can contribute to your health issues as much as 20 percentage.
Talking about workplace, tidy and clean offices save time and increase effectiveness. If everything was kept at designated place in office, employee could quickly locate the required things which results into time saving. Another major benefit is that employees can devote their mind into innovation in stead of burning their energy in resolving mess, which improves workers productivity. For instance, a recent survey on workplace environment suggests that by improving the surroundings of employees' workplace, companies can boost their workers' productivity.
To conclude, keeping all things well arranged will have positive impact on one's mind and body. In my opinion, one should well kept everything in order to keep oneself healthy and boosting effectiveness which definitely contribute in creating healthy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, talking about, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88914154402 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8402851225 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193956995567 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611734952968 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659761310505 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103903808733 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043558575805 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.