Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However some people says it leads to environment damage and should be stopped. To what extent do you agree?
It is being argued that the only way to relief of indigence is economic growth. Some people believe that it contributes to an impact on the environment and hence should be avoided. In my opinion this argument does not hold any water, rather governments should focus on the technology to find long-term and sustainable ways of development to end the poverty.
Thwarting the growth of the poverty-stricken country would be the impractical solution to save the environment. Plenty of nations are still suffering to provide basic needs to their citizen, where development can play a key role to diminish poverty and to serve humankind. In addition, scarce of money can contribute more to pollution by using cheap solution making higher environmental damage. For instance, Afghanistan which is one of the poorest countries, is in the list of top 3 highest polluted country in the world pollution index published in 2019.
At the same time, environmental change is the most challenging issue world is facing today. In order to cater both the problems, world should look for options for sustainable development. In other words, governments can focus on the use of renewable energy sources like solar and wind and plan out carbon neutral ways of achieving the goal. Additionally, government should also subsidize the use of such solutions which can make sure the progress minimizing the impact on environment. For example, Indian government took a step in this direction by announcing subsidy on usage of solar roofs.
To conclude, instead of stopping the economic growth of the developing nations, long-term sustainable growth using innovative environmental friendly solution can help the world to end the poverty with least possible impact on environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...n can help the world to end the poverty with least possible impact on environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28214285714 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00533326958 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3929211463 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180434299329 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689497115633 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736865682354 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124196899219 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990128431284 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.