This is a fact that crimes are being increased day by day in several countries because of the craving for money. Many factors are contributing to this phenomenon and a few measures could be taken to curb these issues.
On the one hand, there are many reasons for growing criminal activities these days. Firstly, according to me, poverty is a big problem facing by the people in today’s fast-paced world. Moreover, in some nations most people are unemployed even they have university degrees as well as skills to do work; however, the government does not provide them employment opportunities which brings poverty among those people. As a result, they start doing crimes for earning their bread and butter because they do not have another way to earn money. Secondly, young ones are encouraged to indulge in many types of offences as people intend to take benefits through youngsters by greed of money.What is more, due to immaturity they become agree to do crimes. Finally, taking up high dose of drugs and alcohol motivates people towards offences and they break public laws. It is interesting to note that once in a while the environment in which people are born , also responsible for this as if elder ones make crimes then young ones follow them .
On the other hand, some solutions could be applied to cure these problems. First of all, as I discussed before unemployment is the root of poverty so government should provide employment to people as per their qualification, skills and abilities which would not only decrease poverty but also boost up the morale of the people. Besides this, the efforts must be made to make sure a peaceful environment in the society and with the collective efforts of administration and public crimes should be decreased which would encourage young people to grow in a positive ambience. Apart from this, higher authorities should spend money for organizing some sports activities which would turns minds of people from drugs to outdoor activities instead of spending anywhere else first.
To conclude, although there are various reasons of increasing crimes in these days but with the joint hand of people, government and administration this bad evil can be curbed entirely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, apart from, as a result, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04076086957 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67261769016 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3474632982 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6428571429 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123566112207 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450832106223 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442148397803 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901396617469 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379428602703 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.