In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?
In many countries, the crime rate is surging due to rising unemployment and poverty. This essay will explore the leading cause of an increase in violation and will discuss steps to mitigate or curb it.
To begin with, unemployment, poverty, acquisition of ammunition, and negativity in social media has been the primary cause for violation. For instance, in undeveloped countries like Tanzania, people are jobless due to declining job opportunities and are unable to feed their families. Being helpless in their situation, they get involved in activities like hijacking the ships and demand ransom from the companies. Additionally, the crumbling economy and decline in the consumer demand have been the reason for companies and factories closure Moreover, the poverty level has peaked due to lack of education, scarcity of jobs, and poor infrastructure in contrast to the developed countries. Furthermore, ammunition can be acquired conveniently at a reasonable price. The youth gets inspired in illegal activities by watching hatred videos which are easily accessible on the internet.
Secondly, providing employment, strict law for obtaining weapons, restricting or barring hate-mongering videos. For example, developed countries like the United Arab Emirates provide employment to people and have implemented laws which are strict for breaking the law. To obtain ammunition, the Government should implement strict regulations and they should have a record of buyers, moreover, the cost to buy weapons, should also increase. They should also develop the infrastructure and provide basic education to the citizens. Furthermore, they should increase their jobs to help them earn their daily bread and butter. They should remove hate-mongering videos from the internet and instead promote civil online reasoning. Additionally, they should implement strict laws for performing criminal activities.
In conclusion, even though there is a surge in illegal activities due to unemployment, implementing strict law and order, and by providing basic needs to the community will eventually reduce the crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70793650794 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06524992744 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7367208612 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815738705674 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286280357964 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373322846288 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065504325373 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487019166479 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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