In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
In modern era, there is an increasing trend in crimes in majority of the countries. There are myriad of factors which would positively influence on the increase of crime rates of a particular country. In this esay, I would discuss on the causes for crimes with possible solutions which could be taken to mitigate the increased rate.
First and foremost, the scarcity of resource allocation would affect on the gradual increase in crime rate and the loopholes in the legal system persuade criminals involve in crimes as well. If the legal system is not equal for all the citizens in a particular country people will lose their trust in laws and it will boost the rate of crimes. For example, if there is no rule governing cyber crimes, there will be no arm to control such incidents in the society. Besides that, cyber crimes and financial crimes are becoming popular due to the advancement of technology. However, the stress level of the population would also negatively affect on the society by influencing the rtae of crimes to a greater extent.
In order to reduce the crime rate in the society governments can ensure fair distribution of resources among it’s population. Governments even can impose rigid laws to control such incidents from their country in the long run. As a long term strategy the education curriculum should be upgraded by the government to inculcate good qualities in the minds of the younger generation. In addition, parents can direct their children in sports activities to encourage them for non violant environment.
In conclusion, more technology should be used in crime dtection in order to eradicate crimnals form our society. It is also believed, the crimes can be reduced by constructing more relaxing areas to mitigate the level of stress of the individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76402283316 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7083326442 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180520614056 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672987561375 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490024373763 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111227197915 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378423865512 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.