In many countries the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with these causes?
Crime rate is growing rapidly in different countries. There are many reasons that have led to increase in illegal acts, but these can be controlled by taking a number of measures.
The main factor of increased crime is unemployment. In order to fulfill their daily necessities people require money, so they seek for a job, but now a days it is too difficult to find a work as demands for a highly qualified employee has also increased. Therefore, those who are less educated lag behind to find a work and get despair and choose the false path of crime. Furthermore, poverty has also added to this issue. Moreover, children with bad company can also get involved in the criminal acts. As at a young age, children are easily attracted to the bad habits.
But this is an issue that can be solved. There are many solutions that can be applied to overcome this problem. But this should be done both individually and nationally. Firstly, the government should be concerned about the joblessness throughout the country, and try to introduce different schemes for unemployed civilians so that poverty can also be eradicated. Moreover, strict punishments should immediately be implemented so that others with a criminal mind set will deter to commit that crime. In addition, parental counselling to children is essential. Parents should take their children in confidence and teach children the difference between right and wrong ways.
In conclusion, the elevation in criminal acts is the result of a number of factors, but it can be eliminated, if both government and individuals show their serious attention to this major issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...uire money, so they seek for a job, but now a days it is too difficult to find a work as d...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... money, so they seek for a job, but now a days it is too difficult to find a work as d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04814814815 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83038820547 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0881442069 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119883929507 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460648316399 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476116130862 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782283719624 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396428413921 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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