In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with these causes?
I am convinced that violence of law can raise many challenges for societies. In recent years, transgression stepping up around the world. In this essay, I will discuss some roots of that unlawful act and some action to surmount these problems.
The number one conviction of the offences is addiction of alcohol. Alcohol can easily be available at any bar in most countries. People get drunk and commit illegal,unethical and sorrowful deeds and harm peoples. How can they harm the people? Firstly, a persone who is drunk and drive can get himself and others in misery by losing control on his vehicle. Secondly, if a man is drunk than he can sexually abuse a women, who cannot defend herself. Thirdly, he can fight with another guy and somehow kill him.
On the other hand, poverty can lead to a devastating amount of sinful acts. A poor man can do whatever you want to make money. For example, if anyone give him money to kill some one than he can do that to feed his family. Listing to another, he can abuse someone to make money for his child need.
To sum up, whearse addiction and poverty higher the level of crime, the govt can take steps by employing some rules to bar and giving employment to poors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , unethical
...ies. People get drunk and commit illegal,unethical and sorrowful deeds and harm peoples. H...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...man is drunk than he can sexually abuse a women, who cannot defend herself. Thirdly, he...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...n is drunk than he can sexually abuse a women, who cannot defend herself. Thirdly, he...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...t to make money. For example, if anyone give him money to kill some one than he can ...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ample, if anyone give him money to kill some one than he can do that to feed his family....
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58986175115 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51056930357 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.701838888 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158619013461 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512220484694 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036574375756 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843357986712 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193344623742 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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