In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.
Nowadays, it has become very common for youngsters to leave their home and live on their own or with their friends after graduating from school. And this is the sign of positive development for both the individual and the society.
After finishing graduation a person becomes capable of making decisions in their life and staying away from home will make them mature by enabling them to understand things and manage stuff on their own. One can become self confident and learn to do household chores as well as cultivate life skills like time management, budget maintenance, savings, and so on. In short, they become responsible citizens who are capable of making a difference to the society.
Parents will also feel relaxed when they see their child understanding his responsibilities and becoming independent. Better still, they can find sometime for themselves. For example, they can pursue a hobby or some other interests. This is not exactly easy when they have grown children staying with them because then they will be spending much of their time taking care of the needs and wants of their children.
It is true that this way of living is also associated with some challenges. In some cases children get involved in wrong activities like drugs or crimes due to bad company of friends or roommates. However, this will not happen if parents teach their children to distinguish between right and wrong and make them strong enough to take responsibility for their actions.
In conclusion, although there might be some consequences to staying away from parents I believe that the advantages of this practice outweigh the drawbacks, for both parents and children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, as well as, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07636363636 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72133657001 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6117330664 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294305138998 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108689379251 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727750367084 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173308607736 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962487187764 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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