In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.
Peoples leave parents homes for working or go to university and doesn't like to stay till they getting married. There is some problem for peoples to leave home early. Peoples have too much things to managing their comfort and spends money like anything. My brother go to another place leave my parents at home so he can go to college. He go out of the house maybe like 17 year age. he alone spend too much money and do bad things with friend and my parent not like this too much. He telling to too much lies and not hearing parents words. My papa telling all peoples to not send child out of house for study purpose because they do bad things. But I was good boy and I go to college after 3 years and I listening parents and not spend money too much. I managed my things get responsibility and grow to get good score in exams. Go out house is good and bad. Peoples have to be good and take money from parents to use for proper things not just wasting money and time. This way, parents happy and child also happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...mes for working or go to university and doesnt like to stay till they getting married....
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...s to leave home early. Peoples have too much things to managing their comfort and sp...
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Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...nts at home so he can go to college. He go out of the house maybe like 17 year age...
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Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ut of the house maybe like 17 year age. he alone spend too much money and do bad t...
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Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... house maybe like 17 year age. he alone spend too much money and do bad things with f...
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Line 1, column 498, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...t like this too much. He telling to too much lies and not hearing parents words. My ...
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Line 1, column 701, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...y and I go to college after 3 years and I listening parents and not spend money t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18974358974 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00509541582 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528205128205 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 253.8 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8266404727 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.8461538462 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167535337669 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694337756844 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489122460961 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167535337669 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.0 8.58950901804 70% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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