In many countries, the government prohibits underage children from getting full-time jobs. Is it a
good thing or bad thing?
Child labour has become a meger concern for many governments all over the world.Hence, in many countries;the government prohibits children to work for full-time. I agree with this completely.We will discuss about the consequences related to the above sentence in this essay.
First,education is every child's basic right.If they are not provided the same and pushed in to various activities from the tender age,it not only affects them but also future generation as well.Childern of any age,whether from a city or a village;education should be their first priority.A government should make sure this happen to possible.If they could not furnished with proper education,whole country will suffer ultimately.If they are not well-educated, they will get diverted to other things faster like theft. This in future will lead to more crime to earn more money.
For example in a city like Kerala,overall literacy rate is 98% hence, there are minimal crime cases and children and the society both can lead a quality of life.
Furthermore,instead of spending time in playing with friends or an outing with a family,they spend more time in earning money due to the lack of education.But,the saddest part is;even after knowing this,many people keep them as workers in a small restaurants or hotels which stops their growth as an individual.They choose any type of job that includes a labour work which in long run deteriorate their health gradually.Also, they go into depression fast after working continuously at such places.
So to conclude,child labour is a threat to the society's growth.This should be prohibited by the goverment immediately for the betterment of children and their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34082397004 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36805548958 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.301907146 49.4020404114 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.714285714 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1428571429 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171350810741 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067668242635 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739888675617 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825243417299 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515431116654 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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