In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Nowadays, people are committing more and more violent crimes in developing nations. Why do these convicts attempt such henious offence? Is it because of zero tolerance level or the class system? It turns out, that both these reasons cause violent felonies and some measures can be taken to control them.
Firstly, people today have decreased patience level, which means that they become angry or frustrated quickly and do not tolerate things that are unfavourable. For example, a man who comes home, sees that his wife is cheating on him with another man and instantly shoots his wife and her lover out of sheer anger. The culprit does not get the time to cool down; therefore, he attempts this homicide. Secondly, the society is divided into various classes because of income inequality. The rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. Such underpriviliged members are unable to meet basic needs for their family and are forced to commit violations like theft, burglery or murder. In short, the convict is found guilty because of the circumstances around him or her.
However, such violence should to be taken into account so that we can reduce these anti-social behaviour. To decrease the frustration level, people must learn to control their anger and start to let go their pain. For instance, if we consider the man in the above example, after watching the scene, he could have thrown his wife and her lover out of his house and could have given her a divorce. In this way, he does not have to commit the crime of passion. The best way to control one's anger is by performing yoga and meditation. In addition, there should be no difference in wealth among people so that concept of rich and poor is eradicated. Everyone has the right to earn and should be given equal wages as this may reduce robbery and murder assualts.
To conclude, the environment and surroundings play a major role in criminology. People should try to remain calm and the society should only develop the concept of single-class background system. This will not only decrease the crime rate but also make a country free of crimes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8650137741 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51647426588 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584022038567 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5895924997 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0952380952 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18431071849 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531387472442 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579978172433 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118608806396 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660110166302 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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