You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Hello Mr. Ryan,
Let me introduce myself. I am Joanna Meyers, victim of car accident that occurred last weekend on Smith Street. I got to know about your name and address from hospital records as they informed me that my medical expenses were paid by you. Futhermore, they also told me that you took me to their emergency ward from the accident site. If it was not for you, I would have not been alive today.
People like you are very rare in this world. I saw many of them passing by me as I lay helpless asking for aid after the Suzuki car driver hit me and drove off quickly. I hardly remember anything post this traumatic incident and became unconscious. The minute I opened my eyes, I saw myself in the recovery room of the hospital. I would like to express my gratitude for saving my life. I cannot express how thankful I am that you took me to the emergency ward on time from the remote site area.
Could you please make sometime next month and visit my residence since I have medical insurance and would like to pay back the amount. I would really appreciate if your family could also come to our home. I am sure everyone would love to hear about your heroic story.
Looking forward to meet you soon!
Yours truly
Joanna Meyers
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...t your heroic story. Looking forward to meet you soon! Yours truly Joanna Meyers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44782608696 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20520521873 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.714378899 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248681980291 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807735504178 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558149449938 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154390396205 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399666539561 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.