In many countries, the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It is argued that criminal activities are increasing in some of the nations and the misconducts are getting heinous day by day. The reason behind this situation is mainly the lack of money with the state to provide financial support to their people, but some steps like authorization can help those nations to solve such problems.
Poverty is the main culprit that has lead to an increase in criminal activities in many nations. The demand for money to feed the family and wealth required to fulfil the basic needs of an individual builds pressure on them to do wrongful activities rather than dying out of hunger. The helplessness of law and order increases the crime rate, therefore it raises the questions on the safety of an individual. For instance, mostly in populous nations like India, the funds with the government are low as compared with the demands of the people.
Although the infliction of strict law and order can be one way to minimize the rise in violent wrongdoings. It will force the individual to follow rules irrespective of his wealth and needs. Another way is the growth in industrialization sector, as it will increase the job opportunities for the unemployed youth and more importantly the source of income to feed the family. Daily work schedule and job responsibilities will make youth disciplined and focused.
In conclusion, a rise in criminal activities is the problem being faced by many nations, and the reason behind such a situation is the scarcity of wealth and loopholes in the imposition of rules and regulations. Therefore, providing a resource for earning money on a daily basis can prevent such situations from becoming worst.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t criminal activities are increasing in some of the nations and the misconducts are getting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01433691756 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90571157798 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9342943749 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137606206415 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460847170804 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353057544201 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731763946893 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115908282906 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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