In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?
The situation of flora and fauna in many nations is very dreadful as the reduction in their number increases with alarming rate. The main reasons for this to happen in first place are urbanization and pollution.The solutions like conservation of parks and nature are the best way to save them from extinction.
There are myriads of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that expansion of cities are leading a way for clearing out the nearby forests. Consequently, habitats are lost due to cutting of trees. As a result, many plants and animals are going down by losing their lives. For example, in Africa, in last decade, numerous species of pigeon extinct because of clearance of Amazon forest area. Additionally, urban wastes such as sewage and factory discharges are causing water pollution. Owing to this, a threat of extermination of marine life is increased . For instance, in India, a river called Ganga has polluted so much that the dolphins living in it has been wiped out . All these factors stand in a bad stead.
However, there are some countermeasures which can curb this trend and one of these are conservative parks. These are the restricted areas where any type of illegal activities of humans are prohibited. Because of this, conservation of many species of plants and animals can resume. As an example, in India, there are 21 nature parks where any external disturbance caused by humans is illegal. Moreover, the any type of wastage should treated before discharged in waters. To exemplify my point, Australia becomes the first country whose policies regarding junk treatment cause less water contamination. Needless to say, these are apparent ways to cove these problems.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach to a conclusion that cutting down of forest and pollution caused by urbanization can be resolved by conservation of nature and treatment of wastages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16099071207 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90423074376 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1812421879 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6111111111 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175523758095 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516598683623 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734968889552 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100179625291 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188412628013 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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