In many countries people are having health problems because they choose to live a unhealthy life. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is been observed that as people living in different parts of the world following unhygienic lifestyle leads to health related issues. This essay discusses reasons why health is getting downgraded and also suggests what can potentially be done to solve this.
There are several reasons of deteriorating lifestyle. Firstly, in this fast pace world no one has got luxury of time. As a result of this many people often opt to eat fast food available easily. Thus, they are missing on all important nutrients affecting their health. Recent survey published in NY Times showed that fast food chains such as Burger King and Subway have seen 248% increase in their revenue in last decade. Thus, bad diet has caused adverse effects on people's well-being. Additionally, in this materialistic world youngsters like to enjoy all amenities and facilities and don't really pay attention towards exercises or other sport activities. Therefore, negligence and lack of physical activities have forged unfavorable living conditions.
Now, there are certainly few things that can be done to overcome this challenge. First of all, government should make some rules and policies that can help people select their diet better. All fast foods should display harmful ingredients first on their label and then show vital ingredients. Government along with some private partnership should open more gym facilities at affordable prices and encourage fellow citizens on joining such programs. Moreover, youngsters should also dedicate less time on playing games or watching movies and should spend more time on physical activities or sports. Parents can also create such environment for children so that it can become a habit for them as they grow.
In conclusion, even though, we are facing some serious consequences with the kind of lifestyle we are choosing, combined efforts of government and private bodies along with contributions from each individuals can save this ship from sinking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ce world no one has got luxury of time. As a result of this many people often opt ...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... enjoy all amenities and facilities and dont really pay attention towards exercises ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35048231511 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7187251012 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649517684887 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1344979782 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254371798023 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767802519902 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826781296561 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155990005548 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099714886238 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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