In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse. What causes this problem? What measures can be taken to solve it?
At present, there is no doubt that world development has reached at its peak as never before but in the name of development it has given birth to phenomenon that it has degraded the quality of life. There are numerous points and reasons behind this trend which I will explain in the further paragraphs with possible solutions.
To begin with, Undoubtly, growing population has boomed up the basic needs such as food and shelter which has discover the trend of clearing lands. Most importantly, inflation has a great deal of contribution regarding such trend. Consequently, lands are expensive or unfordable which force people to live in small houses with more members which produce unhygienic environment and huge waste log and become reason behind causing diseases. Presently, the growing number of cars has increased rather than the past. Alternatively, it is producing more carbon dioxide and smoke which degrades the air quality and produce pollution.
However, this problem cannot be solved overnight but to reduce this trend everyone should take their part to beat this endless happiness. First and foremost, government should try to build ruler areas which will reduce migration trend and control population of cities in the long run. Secondly, people should follow a forestation and plant trees and grass around their houses and at any empty place which will put great impact on controlling air pollution.
At end, after describing problems and their solutions, I can conclude that poor planning and centralization is main reason behind this phenomenon. Therefore, government and people both needs to work by hand in hand to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'discovered'.
Suggestion: discovered
...eeds such as food and shelter which has discover the trend of clearing lands. Most impor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23308270677 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69574824937 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8197256238 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130645348168 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450908881989 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486368333678 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807347484746 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369486803033 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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