In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people
believe that such a ban is justified.
Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking has been banned in public places like parks, hospitals, public
transport and restaurants in many nations. This essay agrees with this
initiative because it reduces the harmful effects of passive smoking and
also encourages smokers to quit.
The primary reason why making it illegal to smoke in public makes
sense is preventing people from having to breathe in second-hand
smoke. Passive smoking can lead to many smoking-related diseases
such as lung cancer, heart disease and stroke, and is something that
non-smokers cannot avoid in the presence of a smoker. The British
Medical Association found that non-smokers who were regularly
exposed to tobacco smoke were 4 times more likely to develop lung
cancer, than those who did not have to breathe in second-hand
smoke.
The second main reason is that this ban helps those addicted to
cigarettes quit their habit. When smokers and non-smokers socialise
together, the smokers are often ostracised from the group because they
have to leave the company of everyone else if they want to light up. As a
result, smokers who decided to quit would feel more a part of the social
gatherings they attend, and this should encourage people who smoke to
give it up. This has proven particularly effective in Ireland, the first
country to introduce a nationwide ban, where people have to leave a bar
or restaurant and smoke outside.
In conclusion, making it against the law to smoke around strangers should
be encouraged because it prevents innocent people from dying of passive smoking and reduces the number of smokers
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- Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 56
- In recent years there has been a rise in the popularity of second hand clothing amongst younger generations Why is this happening Do you think it s a positive or negative development 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 27, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent people from dying of passive smoking and reduces the number of smokers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28015564202 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61278179629 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7564382525 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.7 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161946386689 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760610812232 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649687762875 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454924502864 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575140967653 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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