Some would argue that people should follow local culture when visiting foreign countries whereas, others believe that a diverse culture should be accepted gladly by the host nation. While welcoming the cultural differences can help to increase tourism in the country, I believe that following local traditions can help visitors to
communicate and connect with local people.
Some would argue that people should follow local culture when visiting foreign countries whereas, others believe that a diverse culture should be accepted gladly by the host nation. While welcoming the cultural differences can help to increase tourism in the country, I believe that following local traditions can help visitors to communicate and connect with local people.
On the one hand, some say that the host country should welcome people from different cultures because it can boost the tourism industry in the country. In other words, when tourists visit a foreign country they feel uncomfortable and isolated because of the different cultures altogether. Therefore, if they feel comfortable then it can attract more tourists to that country. For example, according to a study done by the Guardian in the year 2016, Singapore has the highest number of tourists because they are multicultural society containing Singaporean, Indian and Malaysian. Despite this, I think that they should learn or have some information about the local culture.
On the other hand, if visitors are aware of the local traditions and customs it will help them to connect with local people and avoid conflicts during the trip. That is to say that if they follow the local norms and values, they can prevent themselves from getting into a situation of cultural misunderstanding. In Timor Leste, for instance, the tourists have to meet with the head of the tribe to get permission to stay in the village with the natives. The leader will give a punishment if the tourists break the rule. That is why I believe that visitors should give respect to local culture so that they can enjoy their trip without any problem.
To conclude, although accepting the cultural differences wholeheartedly can increase tourism in the country, I believe that visitors should learn about local customs and values to connect with local people and avoid misunderstandings.
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives.What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? 67
- Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly.What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positivedevelopment? 61
- You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter● tell him/her how you found out● explain how you feel about the news● organise to meet your friend for a celebration. 73
- Children over 15 years should be allowed to take their own decision without any interference from their parents? Do you agree or disagree. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24600638978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75751981394 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482428115016 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1496151907 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.547218728727 0.244688304435 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201345018162 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21838979392 0.0667982634062 327% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397908673113 0.151304729494 263% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.261538071654 0.056905535591 460% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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