In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that going to single-sex schools has disadvantages later in life. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, in ample countries all over the world, parents are capable of choosing the school type of their children, whether it will be a single-gender school or a co-educational one. It is believed by some people that when children go to a single-sex school, some negative implications will occur in the future. I completely agree with this view.
Growing the children up in a single-sex school might impact their future social life. When the children, who have communicated with their same-sex for at least 12 years, start their university studying stage, this new life will be uncomfortable to them, albeit in society nature. Thus, this affects making new friends or emotional relations with the opposite sex. Hence, they will feel unbalanced emotionally may be many of them will take time to get used to this stage, and others will get stuck for a while. For example, research elucidates that 60% of adults, who were in a single-gender school, are less successful in their social life than the ones who were in a mixed school.
Single-sex schools will not affect only the social aspect of the children's lives, but also their career since they are not raised co-operating with different people, so this will reflect in their career. Boys and girls who were dealing with their same-sex in school activities will not harmonize smoothly with their different-sex co-workers when they will be adults. Therefore, their teamwork skill will deteriorate dramatically. For instance, a study reveals that employees who were in a co-educational school, communicate with their team better than the ones who were in a single-gender school.
To conclude, after analyzing these facts, it can not be denied that single-gender schools have worse repercussions on the future of the young youth on both social and practical sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15878378378 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87396367132 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557432432432 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8588608617 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351952788269 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152854949785 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105657995907 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245898463149 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118255501806 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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