In many countries, the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What will be the effects of it on the family and society?
There are many of cultures in a family which has been forwarded from generation to generation and acts as a source of keeping the families intact such as that of having meals. But unfortunately, it is a matter of grave concern that now-a-days, this culture has started to slowly diminish from our society. A couple of factors are responsible to eliminate it from our family lives.
First of all, people are so busy at their workplace that they are unable to give time to their dear ones. They are always under pressure to meet their deadlines in order to earn a better livelihood. Consequently, this attitude prevents them away from having meals together. Secondly, especially the young generation, have the aggression of being social at all times and spends their spare time mostly with their friends which makes them skip their precious moments with their families. Furthermore, people have become obsessed with technology such as mobiles and internet so much that they prefer mostly to be on gadgets rather than having meals with their loved ones.
This wiping out of tradition from our society has a very crucial and detrimental impact on our lives. People tend to become far away from their immediate relationships by giving preference to other tasks. The cause of this worst condition is realized by many when they cross a certain age limit but it would be too late to bring back these moments.
To conclude, in spite of all the daily chores, people should have at least one meal a day together in order to gather under a roof and cherish their precious moments with their families and keep this tradition alive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, second, secondly, so, at least, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8844765343 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51232414355 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8711457702 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198066443453 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761406821694 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610529903575 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131374943949 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387092598231 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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