In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household chores.
To what extent do you agree? Give relevant examples.
In most of the nations, women and men are employed full-time. It is therefore considered that both of them should contribute equally to household work. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement and believe that sharing household responsibilities equally between working men and women will help to ease their burden and help to understand each other better.
The first and the most compelling reason why I support the view of dividing household work equally between men and women is that the work will be divided between two people and no one person will be burdened. In other words, sharing equally the household chores will give both partners enough free time, which can be spent together or devoted to some valuable activities. For instance, according to a recent survey in Western India, 75% of the couple that shared household work equally between them, believed that they are able to devote ample time to their hobbies, family and friends; thus, keeping them happy and satisfied.
Another argument is that sharing responsibility equally between male and female will help them to understand each other better. Since both are working and have the pressure of work and household responsibilities, both men and women will understand better how difficult it is to allocate time and manage both the tasks appropriately. For example, there is less number of divorces in northern India because most of the couples have full-time employment and there is a culture to share all the non-office work equally, that helping them to understand each other in a better and sophisticated manner.
However, there are a few vital aspects that cannot be overlooked in favour of one person working and another taking care of the home. It must be admitted that sharing responsibilities of the home can sometimes become a difficult task for one person who is ignorant about this work. He will have to face difficulty in managing both the work and might even become irritated by doing household chores.
In conclusion, it can be commented that distributing the household work equally between men and women helps the whole family and individuals at home. I believe that it can not only help to ease out burden of one person but also help to understand each another more appropriately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07936507937 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75738546511 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4617885456 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.142857143 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263491417412 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111811419085 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719786802817 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168793735462 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701459612272 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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