In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first months after the birth of their babies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In is undeniable that several companies allow their women employees to take some six months of maternity vacation after arrival of their child. While there are enormous benefits associated with this trend, drawbacks can not be forgotten. In my opinion, advantages of taking leaves after giving birth to a baby outweigh the disadvanatges.
To begin with positives, getting ready a woman for work again is the prime and most important positive aspect of giving maternatiy leaves. To explain it in more detail, during the pregnancy a lady faces a plethora of physical and mental chellanges which makes her weak, so after giving birth she needs sometime to rebuild her body and gain the confidence back. Moreover, on the baby's arrival, a child needs her mother more as compare to the company for whcih his/her mother works. To exemplify, Alomst all the countries have announced approximately 6 months of maternity leaves for women workers and this law is giving the lady workers a chance to acquire their energy back and allowing them to give rest to their bodies so that they can return to work without any hassle. Therefore, allowing ladies to take time off for a certain duration post delivery is a highly admireable action, and beneficial for both company and its workers.
On the other hand, downsides of this trend can not be ignored such as lack of interest in rejoining the firm. To explain it more in detail, once a woman worker gets some time off and has the responsibilty of taking care of her baby then sometimes it discourages her to go back to work. However, this is not always true because nowadays women have work from home option because if companies will be more flexible then this issue can also be mitigated. Hence, government and companies should consider the
To conclude, although there are fewer negatives of allowing women workers to take leaves and take care of their babies such as lose interest in working again, positives are more of this trend such as giving time to get ready themselevs and gain their confidence back.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... arrival, a child needs her mother more as compare to the company for whcih his/he...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ause if companies will be more flexible then this issue can also be mitigated. Hence...
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Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnment and companies should consider the To conclude, although there are fewer ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89398280802 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53318789492 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541547277937 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6251352014 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262209825438 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101041744287 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111140193362 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194267365695 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116911974998 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... arrival, a child needs her mother more as compare to the company for whcih his/he...
^^
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ause if companies will be more flexible then this issue can also be mitigated. Hence...
^^^^
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnment and companies should consider the To conclude, although there are fewer ne...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89398280802 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53318789492 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541547277937 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6251352014 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262209825438 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101041744287 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111140193362 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194267365695 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116911974998 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.