Dear Mathew,
I have been looking forward to visit you in Canada, but it would not be possible for me to travel on the 1st of June 2022 anymore. There is an important event I am going to attend, so coming over wouldn’t work during this period.
The event in question is my seminar defense and degree examination. It came as a shock to everyone, due to the impromptu information. The strike which was just called off contributed to this change in time-table. Studying starts immediately!
I want to apologize for the disappointment this might have caused. The government does not care about education! Plans were made, yet the unforeseen circumstances interrupted everything. I promise to make it up to you when I come over to visit you, because you will do the same if you were in my shoes.
Finally, I’d suggest that my trip to Canada should be in the summer, as it would be the best time for students to go on vacation. How about the Christmas holidays? Or, we can just leave it till I’m done with my clearance next year.
Take care,
Adam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, I have been looking forward to visit you...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
...Mathew, I have been looking forward to visit you in Canada, but it would not be poss...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h my clearance next year. Take care, Adam.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67553191489 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72748924851 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696808510638 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9130923778 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216480223081 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056765863003 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628862058268 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118401584013 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779825052927 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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