Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.
It is true that nowadays plenty of people change their place of residence and settle abroad. It is considered by some individuals that resettlement is advantages for children; while others claim that, it is difficult for them to immigrate. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument then I will give my own opinion.
On one side of the argument, there are those who claim that immigration to a foreign country is beneficial for children. This is because, moving to other country demands from a child to learn a new language, which is beneficial for the development of the brain in terms of neuroplasticity. As well known, a bilingual person have number of advantages in comparison with a person who speaks only a single language. Thus, youngsters learning foreign language improves their memory and enhance their decision-making ability, as well as the multitasking ability. Studies show that the benefits of learning a new language include higher scores on standardized exams in math, reading comprehension and vocabulary by multilingual students compared to the scores of monolingual students.
Contrary, opponents may argue that moving abroad will bring the youth in a totally different environment: a new school or a kindergarten, requirement to study a foreign language, lack of friends, a new house, changed behavior of the parents due to the adaptation process. It goes without saying, that a child will probably struggle with establishment of connections with peers because of different cultural background and misunderstanding. In addition, an overall performance in a school declines as a child will not understand specific subject language. As a result, the youngsters may feel left behind and overwhelmed by the circumstances and parents may not be able to resolve them effectively.
In conclusion, I think that both sides have their arguments. On balance, however, I believe that positive consequences of the immigration significantly outweigh the negative one. Moreover, any upcoming difficulties can be solved and it just demands some readiness from parents and from children as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3622754491 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23561836721 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7404725594 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212221614813 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621244450456 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636783582408 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126848755813 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596700372992 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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