Young people who commit crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people have an opinion that the youngsters in case of committing a crime have to be punished on the same basis as adults. I partly agree with this notion because today many children commit severe crimes and definitely must be responsible to the fullest extent of the law.
First, I strongly believe that people who commit serious and brutal crimes such as homicide and torture should be punished respectively without consideration of the criminal’s age. This is because these kinds of people should realize that there will be serious consequences if they commit a serious crime. Unfortunately, today some adolescences or even younger children are sure that they will not be sentenced for a whole period due to their age. Thus, if the law is equally strict for adults and the youth committing capital offences, it will play the role of a deterrent.
However, from point of you, in cases of minor crimes such as stealing young people should not be punished in the same way as adults. The main reason is that being sentenced to jail children will probably get seriously involved in criminal activity due to interactions with hardened criminals. Thus, it would be much better to punish them by serving community services, which would help them to see another side of the coin. For example, helping elderlies or doing other social valued activities young offenders have the opportunity to see that kind and friendly relationships are more important for happy and prosperous life than material things.
In conclusion, I somehow agree that young offenders should be treated by law as adult lawbreakers, especially in the case of felonies. Meanwhile, in terms of petty crimes, punishment should take into consideration a person’s age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10839160839 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78481742285 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0576301235 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412157396496 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142948908802 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959646857971 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235891230927 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337150693972 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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