Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Many museums receive money from people for visiting the museum, while other museums to accept people for free.I believe the disadvantages of making money in museums outweigh the benefits of it. I state my reasons in the following paragraphs.
In many countries, museums are an inspiring and educational source ,for example art, design, fashion, and architecture for the growing and creative industries that are growing and growing day by day. Free access to museums is in fact a long-term investment for this part of the economy and therefore has long-term benefits in securing social welfare for the whole community. Tourism, on the other hand, is an important part of the economy and tourists choose their destination in light of their costs. If museums are involved in attracting tourists to a city, it will also bring profitability to the city's various businesses and services.
Museums display them while preserving our cultural, artistic, political and spiritual heritage. Therefore, every citizen should have access to these important resources as part of their citizenship rights and take advantage of the educational opportunities that museums have created for all ages.Many museums that the government does not support have to sell tickets to cover some of their expenses. As many government museums around the world sell tickets to the museum, they lose a significant portion of their potential visitors who are most vulnerable to society. The Victoria Albert Museum in London, for example, faced a 15 percent drop in visitors when it decided to enter the museum. On the one hand, free access to museums seems to be essential to open access to educational and cultural opportunities in societies.
To sum to, believe it is right for them to pay entrance fees to museums. But it will eliminate educational opportunities for the whole community and reduce the number of museum visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26557377049 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84460195449 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6707372047 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36047815911 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123648631545 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10298132853 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240038567856 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992010461084 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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