Many offenders commit crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Once you do a crime and serve the penalty, it is likely that you would do a crime again. This essay will explain why this behavior gets adapted to a person and the steps to be taken to stop repeating crime one after the other.
Newspapers claim the change in individual's behavior after serving punishment for the first crime they commit in life. In my opinion, these changes occur due to experiencing the punishment and understanding the dept and also how offender is treated in the society after being punished for the crime. One a offender is released after punished he gets rejected by his relatives and friends, when on any event the offender gets pointed out and his society treats him differently. The society tends to sideline the individual and classify him as a criminal for rest of the life. For example, one of my friend who accidentally drove over a dog and he was punished by the court to serve jail term of 3 months. Returning from serving his punishment, he realized none of his friends or family was welcoming him as before. Occasionally he was also called murderer to crack a job but this provoked him to do more crimes as he felt left alone from his society.
Awareness to the society periodically would be of good help to explain them how to behave with a offender who has served his first punishment. They must take up the responsibility and help such law breakers to start a new life in right path. For example, an offenders family and friends can help him with a job to keep the person engaged in a routine life. This can change his thought process and start to live better life between his society.
To conclude, a small step from family and friends of an offender can help the person from not committing another crime and this way the crime rate of each and every society can be reduced massively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'offenders'' or 'offender's'?
Suggestion: offenders'; offender's
...new life in right path. For example, an offenders family and friends can help him with a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ciety. To conclude, a small step from family and friends of an offender can he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57926829268 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53475983794 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509146341463 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9378934562 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276444647745 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988412833167 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077311853421 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19269552688 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489704950211 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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